melody is good but. missing the touch :-/
But you proved yourself with previous song so...
congrats, scouted ya :-)
melody is good but. missing the touch :-/
But you proved yourself with previous song so...
congrats, scouted ya :-)
Alright, I understand. Thank you so much!
01:13 - 02:25
my fav. part :3
Those are just so good. other parts are like they are but that part is just good.
i like it a lot :-D
Beginning is odd but it becomes soo cool since the first ,,drop"
Great job, you`ve improved :-D
Thanks!! Your feedback means a lot! :)
drop isn`t all that bad but it is really, would i say bland? yea that`s probably the thing.
But i can see that potential and if you keep this kind of songs up you might improve A LOT
one important side-note is: it doesn`t have any background (chimes, strings etc.)
The drops are missing it more than any other part.
so in one word: improve. Try out FX and different strings. best you cn do is to try out diferent musical styles to find out what fits for you :-)
that`s all.
Thanks for feedback! I agree with that :/ i usually have the most trouble with the drop.
Melody isnt bad... just needs some basses in the backround and some FX and it would be totally diferent song (in a good way)
Just a bit boring to listen and for a longer period, a bit annoying.
But melody itself isnt totally bad so i advise to keep your work up :-)
Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind for my future work! And yes, I do agree that this was a bit annoying to listen to for a long period of time, I was a bit tired when I made this, so I just rushed it. I'll try not to rush as much in the future. :]
Pretty good. a bit bland at parts what i hope you learn how to fix it. also wtf is that Sound for main melody XD.
its not bad but its interesting/diferent.
Keep it up and might get scouted ;-)
Thanks for the comment!
(used a staccato multilayer supersaw with a little cutoff, phaser, and reverb for the main melody btw)
i agre with Rizzerboy.
does miss some things but its very cool non-the-less :-)
keep it up
Thank you! :P
I reccoment to swich programs QUICKLY.
Music Maker Jam doesnt have much freedom and you cant make much out of it when yu wanna become more proffesional artist.
Its just for those who wanna sound cool, but it really isn`t concidering that every song i hear what was made with this, is basically the same.
so change the program.
i dont really care to be honest, im only posting audio for fun, and what other programs will i use for android? Or do i really need to switch to PC..
pretty heavy
not much more to say XD
Thanks for the Review! :)
Cool bits B-)
Thx B-)))
woah.
really cool wubs.
Are you using FL studio 12?
i would like to collaborate if we could :-)
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